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A whispered wind, a soft remembered sigh,
an endless story penned in blood and tears.
The eagle’s wings are sharp against the sky.

We tell a tale of women, you and I,
connected womb to womb across the years:
a whispered wind, a soft remembered sigh.

In watching you, I learned that I could fly.
The earth beneath our feet belied my fears—
the eagle’s wings are sharp against the sky.

Our silent story stands in mute reply
to life, a song in stillness; I can hear
a whispered wind, a soft remembered sigh.

If I track your gaze and even pass it by
I’ll never in this life lack for frontiers.
The eagle’s wings are sharp against the sky.

Someday I hope another daughter’s cry
will echo in my arms and toward your ears,
a whispered wind, a soft remembered sigh;
the eagle’s wings are sharp against the sky.
©2003-2009 ~tessuraea
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Author's Comments

It's Mother's Day, after all. And I'm broke. So this is a villanelle--which I'm starting to consider the perfect form for a gift, since they're really easy to personalize--for my mom.

I printed it on top of a picture of an eagle, made it look pretty.

It's very forced because, well, I didn't write it until this morning. I hope she likes it.

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This is soooo soooo beautiful...not only as a smooth structure but the images it evoces as well! i am sure your mum is gonna love it!

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I am not a bitch, I am THE BITCH, and Mrs Bitch to you!
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Love... I know you know more than anyone whether your work is forced or flowing, but this flows to my ear. It's gentle, and strong, and rooted. I can't think of anything more true to say.



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Did you know that my first lover was the ocean?
:iconveritactive:
Wow, this is fantastic. A soaring, uplifting, beautiful, fragile ... okay, words fail me.

+fav

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Stagger down with ragged cloak and jagged dagger.
:iconinlezorn:
*sigh* so beautiful *sigh* your talent is so graceful Heart

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I have two breast that jiggle like jello.
Look at *redux jiggle my jello;)
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:iconsnap-class:assistant & people I :heart: :iconkrazykrissy::iconchival:: iconstevesm::iconblinddragon:a nd adore many
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The last verse is such a strong ending. It made me smile because I've been there before!

Your very talented! :) (Smile) Hurry up and submit more!

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"If the doors of perception were cleansed, everything would appear to man as it truly is, infinite." -William Blake

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May 11, 2003

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